Wow. First, brilliant. Second, this would make a phenomenal exercise for a composition class of any sort, to demonstrate either reading between the lines, completely revising something, or the ability to shorten a piece to the bare bones
The Good Vibe - Inspirational Picture Quotes~ I just finished my first eulogy. My mother had an incandescent spirit. We put her ashes back into the ocean in two days time. She was never old but she had lots of stories.